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Hey, I completely understand you. I was nervous when I posted my first story too. Don't worry, any comments people make on your work will be to help your writing. ...

Wow! It's beautiful! :D I usually don't review poetry but this caught my eye. Even though it's on the short side it has a lot of feeling. The rhythm is ...

Hey jessabelle4C! I raised the knife as if I planned to kill him. I didn't. Yet. It might look better like this: I raised the knife as if I planned ...

Ooh! This is awesome! :elephant: It's creative and original (so far). I'm not good at nitpicks, so you won't be getting those from me. :oops: But here are some suggestions. ...

OK once again I couldn't find any grammar problems. Your sentences are well-structured. “What do I do,” said Michael. This is about all I could find. There should be a ...

Wow this is turning out to be really good. I can't find anything wrong with it grammatically. Your style is amazing, it's so realistic. I feel like I'm actually there. ...

I need it to be error-free first! You don't have to make it perfect the first time around. Just write all your ideas down and then go back and fix ...

OK I'm not good at reviewing poetry, but hey, anyone can tell that was a well written piece of work. I felt the intensity of it. You definitely have the ...

Hey I really like those books too! I'm finished the fifth one and am waiting for the sixth one from the library. I like the series because they're not boring. ...

And yet another excellent piece of work from YodelingVet1! (by the way, love the username! :wink: ) You have a neat writing style. If someone else wrote this story it ...

This is so cute! :lol: You're very creative, and the story was great. Here's a few suggestions that might help: Dialogue: There sure it lots of it (and that's good!) ...

Yeah, you were right about the end. I found it a little confusing but I think I got the idea. So this is what you were planning, it's good! :D ...

Hello, thank you for reviewing my story! Thought I would return the favour. OK so when I first looked at this I thought it was slightly boring, but once I ...

It was funny! :smt005 I love your style where you emphasize your words. It gives it its own feel. I'm not that great with words so if I say your ...

Hi sparkle8744! You asked me to review your story, so here I am. Your description is good but for some reason I have trouble picturing what you're trying to say. ...